Furyborn by Claire Legrand // Great Premise, Bad Execution, Bland Characters, and ?? Bi Rep [ARC Review]

There are books I can’t remember for the life of me, and there are books I wish I didn’t remember.

Furyborn is one of the latter.

I enjoyed parts of it? I hated others of it? I was confused about it, but also really bored, and I found it hard to actually care about it sometimes? (Which basically describes how I feel about myself.)

But I can say with all the confidence in me: my feelings towards Furyborn are not positive.

There are a lot of mixed reviews, so it’s possible that I just may be one of the people who didn’t like it, and you might be someone who loves it! But I really… did not enjoy it. So here’s a rant on the bland characters and the very unclear bi rep.

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FURYBORN

Claire Legrand, publishing May 22, 2018

Furyborn (Empirium, #1)When assassins ambush her best friend, the crown prince, Rielle Dardenne risks everything to save him, exposing her ability to perform all seven kinds of elemental magic. The only people who should possess this extraordinary power are a pair of prophesied queens: a queen of light and salvation and a queen of blood and destruction. To prove she is the Sun Queen, Rielle must endure seven trials to test her magic. If she fails, she will be executed…unless the trials kill her first.

A thousand years later, the legend of Queen Rielle is a mere fairy tale to bounty hunter Eliana Ferracora. When the Undying Empire conquered her kingdom, she embraced violence to keep her family alive. Now, she believes herself untouchable–until her mother vanishes without a trace, along with countless other women in their city. To find her, Eliana joins a rebel captain on a dangerous mission and discovers that the evil at the heart of the empire is more terrible than she ever imagined.

As Rielle and Eliana fight in a cosmic war that spans millennia, their stories intersect, and the shocking connections between them ultimately determine the fate of their world–and of each other.

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I think that the problem with this book is that it has such an interesting and fabulous premise. There are so many tiny aspects of this world and the story taking place that are so fascinating, and it could’ve made a REALLY great novel… but it didn’t.

Those aspects really could’ve been amazing also if the book had not been 400+ pages long. It is unnecessarily long and it was PAINFUL to get through. Even worse, it was told through alternating viewpoints, making it even longer. Rielle’s chapters were mainly about very similar trials that we knew she would complete. Eliana’s chapters were filled with lots of action, but had no ultimate destination.

The beginning was super !! good !! and it was actually interesting !! The prologue got me instantly hooked*. The first few chapters were action-packed and well-paced. And then suddenly we get to a point in the book where things start to drag and I suddenly find myself not caring anymore. A shock.

*Actually, while the prologue was exciting and engaging, it gave away waaaay too much information. Certain plot twists that were revealed around the 75% mark were easily guessed… right after reading the prologue. This is not good writing? When your plot twists aren’t twists and more of a confirmation of a theory you’ve had for 300 PAGES, you have a problem???

The characters could have been SO GOOD. So, so good. But again (like everything else in this book!!!), the actual writing of them failed and whatever emotion I felt towards them at the beginning slowly faded away after the numbing apathy that comes when you have to read 500 pages of something you don’t like.

☼ RIELLE ☼

Rielle is a woman whose magical powers are discovered after an incident, and she is forced to complete trials to prove those powers. She’s written as a good-person-soon-to-turn-evil, so this gives off the impression throughout the book that she is a morally grey character. Except she was really just annoying all the time and showed no sign of the morally-grey-ness I LOVE.

She just got on my nerve A LOT. I don’t know what it was about her, but there was something in the way that she was written that just made her SO annoying. And also, I can’t define any personality traits of hers. None. (Besides annoying.)

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this was literally me the whole book

☼ ELIANA ☼

Eliana is a bounty hunter who kills to survive. But an attempt to write her as if she’s three-dimensional, or the least bit interesting, fails, and she’s instead written in two dimensions: One is the “I kill everyone and I fear no one and you can try to hurt me and you will FAIL” side, and the other is the “I am so guilty about everything and I’m going to get really angsty and I’m also going to do something reckless” side. (It doesn’t work well.)

She was a slightly better character than Rielle, in my opinion, but just like Rielle, it’s very hard to actually get an idea of what her character is like?? Because she is nothing but bland??

☼ AUDRIC, SIMON, & CORIEN ☼

I’m grouping these three together because they were the love interests. First of all: THAT SEX SCENE NEVER HAPPENED I DO NOT CLAIM IT. Second of all: There is a really weird love triangle between Rielle, Audric, and Corien. Except Rielle doesn’t want to be attracted towards Corien, but can’t help it. (Oh yes, totally healthy.)

The romance between Eliana and Simon was weird, unnecessary, had no chemistry, and also, had a suspicious age gap (8 years). I found myself in between levels of “dislike” and “I don’t care” about all of these characters.

☼ REMY & NAVI ☼

These are the only two people I claim. Remy is a poor smol who deserves better, and Navi is a GAY ICON I TELL YOU SHE IS GAY SHE IS GAY SHE IS GAY.

Okay, and now the rant regarding… the bi rep, which was extremely messy. And vague. And unclear. And just so very hidden.

One main character is said to have flirted with both men and women, but that’s the only mention of it. There is nothing else to suggest that she is actually attracted to both men and women. Bi women can flirt however they like, of course!! But just saying that they flirted with both men and women doesn’t mean actual attraction to them, and to me, it just doesn’t offer good rep.

The second main character mentions that in the past, she had sex with both men and women in order to get information, but that doesn’t equal actual attraction. She talks about the best lovers she’s had, one male and one female. This can totally mean that she’s attracted to women and men! But the way this was written, FOR ME, a multi-gender-attracted person, read off as her just enjoying sex with that woman. The act of ONLY having or enjoying sex ≠ equal attraction. ONLY action ≠ attraction.

And I’m completely fine with the fact that both of these girls end up with male characters—if they’re bi, they’re bi, and the gender of their partner can’t change that. But I didn’t feel like they were bi at all, just straight, and if they WERE bi, it was really messy rep to me.

(Note that I read an ARC and it may change in final publication. But the way this all read to me as a multi-gender attracted person did not seem like actual bi rep. I PERSONALLY do not feel good calling this bi rep, but if you felt represented by this, yay!! That’s awesome, and your feelings are 100% valid! But so are mine.)

There’s a chance that in the next books, the plot may have an actual point (wow!), the characters may actually be well-developed and fleshed out (omg!!), and bisexuality will actually be clarified and explored (amazing!)… but this particular book did a sore job of it.

It’s a big no from me, and everyone can leave me alone all bi myself to cry in disappointment, good night.

★★☆ [1.5]

thank you to Sourcebooks Fire for the review copy in exchange for an honest review! this did not my affect my opinions in any way.


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32 thoughts on “Furyborn by Claire Legrand // Great Premise, Bad Execution, Bland Characters, and ?? Bi Rep [ARC Review]

  1. This is the ultimate Furyborn review and I want to read it every day because it is everything. Like the bi rep just made me sooo made. And Rielle and the problematic love triangle *siiiiggggghhhhh*
    Also, I don’t think money could make me read the sequel? I’m just not interested.

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    1. AAAHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH ELIZABETH!! And yeah, the bi rep made me really uncomfortable? Obviously, if they’re bi, they’re bi. But it was written so unclearly and I’m not sure if the author did any research whatsoever or even cared about accurately representing bi people?

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  2. I have my review for this schedule and, yeah, I didn’t really enjoy it. The dual POV thing just didn’t work with the characters being 1000 years apart in time. Their storylines had little to do with each other, and the readers already know what happened 1000 years ago, so what’s the point? Also, I didn’t realize there was supposed to be bi rep until I started skimming Goodreads reviews. I mean, there’s like a throwaway comment about one of the characters sleeping with a woman once?

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    1. Omg yes?? Like, their plots seemed to have no correlation to each other and it was pretty disconcerting to have to jump 1000 years every other chapter. (And yeah, we know what happened to Rielle, so her POV was almost useless.) Exactly! If I hadn’t heard about the bi rep beforehand (and therefore expected much more from it), I probably wouldn’t have noticed it.

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  3. What was the age of the two characters with the 8 year age difference? I’m just curious. lol. I have a 9 year age difference with my boyfriend but I’m 25. I’ve heard so many mixed reviews on this book and I can’t decide if I want to read it or not.

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    1. I think the female character was 18 or 19? (My review makes it seem worse than it actually is, I apologize!! I would say what particular scene made me a little uncomfy, but it’s a bit of a spoiler!) I hope that you’ll love this if you end up picking it up <3

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      1. Oh no! I think you have every right to be uncomfortable with it. I just wanted to know in case I decided to pick it up. Because I can handle pretty big age gaps but not super big, ya know? I’ll def be checking it out!

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  4. aghhh honestly I just agree with everything here. and I’m SO disappointed in it.😭😂I really hated the plot because it was so frikkin’ boring (like the trials!! we’re so over trials, pls, YA fantasy it’s just DONE) and I couldn’t get onboard with how disconnected both plot lines felt?! It was wildly odd. And how people were showing up like 1000 years apart or whatever it was. Talk about long life spans.😂So yeah, I was bored and confused (and also confused with the bi rep so I’m glad you said what you did there). Sadness it didn’t work out for either of us.🙊

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    1. Sorry you didn’t like it any better than I did, Cait! And yeah, the trials were doubly boring, since we’ve all seen them before and we knew what would happen to Rielle?? And yes, the plotlines were really unconnected (at least, for now) and it was so disconcerting to jump into these two completely different stories. :’)

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  5. This is the second negative review on Furyborn I’ve read this morning… and I started my arc last night HAHAHA – talk about bad timing. I’m still excited though to see if I’m one of those people that end up liking this book or, like you, who didn’t like it much at all. And 500 pages?? OHMYGOSH – I can definitely see how that could drag.

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    1. Oh no, I hope you end up liking it, Savannah! All the people I buddy read the book with did NOT like it, if that’s any sign, but I really do hope you end up being one of the fans of this book. 😂 500 PAGES IS SO LONG. SO LONG. I HATE IT.

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  6. this book sounds messymessymessy…….why is YA bi rep always terrible? it’s so tragic

    great review i will continue to be zero percent interested in this book <3

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  7. I have been seeing a lot of mixed reviews about furyborn which just made me lose interest in it. Who knows though, maybe the next book would be better. How are you May?

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  8. While I overall enjoyed Furyborn, I agree with the reasons you listed in your review. It could have been much stronger and I found the world building rather lacking in addition to the poor character development. I enjoyed it enough that I am hopeful for the next book in the series (and that these things will be addressed), but I definitely get why you and many others didn’t enjoy this one.

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    1. I’m glad you could find a few things to agree with, Kaleena! Yeah the worldbuilding wasn’t the best, and the character development could’ve been SO SO much better. And I really hope the sequel is better! Perhaps this will be a redeemed series for me?

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  9. Oh I’m so sorry to hear this book was so messy and just, not worth it overall. I think it’s the second or third review I am reading about this book where, well, the reviewer just isn’t happy about everything and I do think I won’t read that one now, it does not appeal to me in any way, haha. I’m a bit sad to hear about how bland it was though, it seems like it had some potential :/
    Lovely review! :)

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    1. Ah, no it’s all right! Complaining about it was fun at least :’) And yeah, it really did have so much potential? (And if YOU say it had potential as a fantasy book, when you’re a contemporary lover, it must mean it had a LOT of potential 😂) Thank you Marie !!!! <3

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  10. May the salt in your final paragraph I’m LIVING. But also not living because I was so so looking forward to this book especially when word came out that there was bi rep in it? AND THEN THE BI REP IS THIS? The bi ‘rep’ you described made me so uncomfortable I completely agree with you :/ Why can’t my lil bi heart just get some good bi rep in fantasy *cries* Great review though! ❤

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